After close

The film

Every rewrite has to match this. A dropped shot teaches the next one.

3 shots · 1 held · 1 teaching the next rewrite

• Shot 1Heldthe diner after close, Mara small in an extreme wide, wiping the counter, locked off, practicals and the red neon outsideDelete
• Shot 2Droppedclose on her hands turning the ring, rack focus from the neon in the window to the ring, no faceIt cut to her face and lost the rack onto the ring.Delete
• Shot 3Openshe kills the open sign and the room falls to the streetlight outside. medium close, slow push-in, she does not look at cameraDelete

Shot 2 missed: It cut to her face and lost the rack onto the ring.

Drag a card by its grip, or use the arrows, to change the cut. Give a shot a still or a clip (longer clips can be trimmed to 15 s) and the rewrite can match it.

1. No frame yetShot 1Heldthe diner after close, Mara small in an extreme wide, wiping the counter, locked off, practicals and the red neon outside
2. No frame yetShot 2Droppedclose on her hands turning the ring, rack focus from the neon in the window to the ring, no face
3. No frame yetShot 3Openshe kills the open sign and the room falls to the streetlight outside. medium close, slow push-in, she does not look at camera